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  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    She thought about that dream.  Could there be some truth in it?

    She thought maybe she should contact Brad and let him know she's on her way to Vegas.  He would probably be worried about her if she disappeared.

  • bedo
    bedo Member Posts: 1,866
    edited October 2011

    Then she wondered, "I wonder if Carlos is an undercover agent and that's why Brad told me to stay away, ...I keep screwing up the busts!   OOOOOOOOOHHHH!   She wailed!!!!!!!! I don't trust anyone anymoooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrre. 

  • Tatina123
    Tatina123 Member Posts: 480
    edited October 2011

    Mary's mental exhaustion forced her to get some more shut eye on the bus ride to Las Vegas. The steady hum of conversation among the old ladies didn't wake her but the slap on the back of her head eventually did.



    "Wake up, Sleeping Beauty," an old lady said, smacking Mary's head again with her purse. "Get your lazy butt up and get to those slot machines....I hear them calling my name now!"



    Mary pulled herself up from her seat and exited the bus. The old ladies were already inside the casino.



    Mary followed them and felt someone tug on her sleeve.



    "Hey there, feeling lucky to spin the big wheel? a casino employee asked. "If so, come follow me"









  • ruthbru
    ruthbru Member Posts: 57,235
    edited October 2011

    Mary followed the man into a back room. As she entered, the door slammed shut behind her.

    "Well, well, well, hello Mary," came a voice from the shadows.

    Mary squinted, "Carlos?"

    "I hear you've been talking to the cops, Mary," he said in a soft menacing voice.

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    Carlos!!! How did you know i would be here? Cried Mary. I watched you get on the bus to vegas and checked it out, you didnt answer my question why have you been talking to the cops? You have it all wrong carlos, i found out today that Brad, the police officer is my long lost brother, Yeah right said carlos you expect me to believe that?  About that time one of the older ladies who bonked mary on the head saw her go in there with carlos and came in, hit carlos on the head with her big purse and grabbed marys arm, come on lets get the hell out of here

  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    Getting out of here seemed like a good course to take, and Mary left the room with Carlos on the floor.

    "How did you get in?" Mary asked.   "Carlos doesn't seem stupid enough to not lock the door."

    "I know how to pick locks."  the old lady replied.

    "Where did you learn that trick?" Mary asked.

    "I used to work for the FBI."  the old lady replied.

  • ruthbru
    ruthbru Member Posts: 57,235
    edited October 2011

    "Actually the whole bus, that you so stupidly got on to, was full of retired FBI agents and we are on a secret sting operation in Vegas," she sighed, "since we are gonna have to rescue you continually if you stay in the dark, I might as well let you in on it."

  • Tatina123
    Tatina123 Member Posts: 480
    edited October 2011

    Mary and the old lady headed to the nickel slot machines.



    "Wait a second, what's your name," Mary yelled out, trying to speak over the climgs and clangs of the slot machine.



    "You can call me CJ," she said, stopping to face Mary. "Listen here, kiddo, you better stick to me like glue. Now it looks like we're here to cover two FBI operations."



    "Why two?" Mary wanted to know.



    CJ hit Mary's arm with her purse. "Are you always this dense? We're here for the original job and now we just got dragged into your mess."



    CJ was as tough as nails, Mary thought. Her brain was in a foggy state with so much going on--she couldn't help it. "So, tell me what job it is that you gray-haired dynamos are up to?"



    CJ threw Mary a sneaky grin.

  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    "Well, I certainly can't tell you about the original job, but you do deserve to know about Carlos."

    "I can see that, CJ." said Mary.

    "Carlos, as you suspected, murdered a woman at your party." CJ said.

  • Tatina123
    Tatina123 Member Posts: 480
    edited October 2011

    Mary drew out a stressful breath. "And do you know if he has any mafia ties? Mary wanted to know.



    CJ eyed her hard. "Why would you say that?"



    "I heard it through the rumor mill," Mary said.



    "That's a load of crappola.....you heard it from your long lost brother Brad, the cop," CJ said.



    Mary was stunned. "How did you know Brad was my brother. I just found that out today!"



    "I know everything, kiddo," she said, winking.



    And Mary was starting believe it, too.

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    We need you to try to get close to carlos again, said cj, and get him to talk, we of course will be watching you the whole time, and put a wire on you.

    But, he already wanted to kill me, said Mary, how can i be of any help, without ending up in a body bag myself, i dont think i want to get involved in fact im outta here!

    Not so fast kiddo, you already are involved, dont forget you were at the party and have been friends with him, we could just take you in and book you if you want, said cj

    What do you want me to do? Said Mary, I guess i have no choice

  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    "Of course you have a choice.  There are few situations where you don't have a choice." CJ said. "I want you to do this for yourself, not for me."

    "Just how will helping you benefit me?"  Mary asked in an irritated voice.

    "I can't let you know all the details.  You just have to trust me."  CJ said.

    "That's what every person I've talked to in the last 24 hours has said to me." Mary complained.

  • Tatina123
    Tatina123 Member Posts: 480
    edited October 2011

    "Listen, I know I've been giving you a hard time since we got on the bus, but you seem like a good kid and a smart cookie," CJ said. "Somehow, you got dragged into this mess and we'll get you out of it.". CJ's eyes wandered down one of the slot machine isles.



    "What?" Mary asked.



    "I think I just spotted one of Carlos' thugs. We've booked a few guest rooms here at the hotel part of the casino. Let's head up there now and start figuring out a plan."



    "Should we call my brother, Brad?" she asked CJ.



    "He's on his way now down here now. You're not alone, kiddo. You're one of us now," CJ said.

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    Once in the room, Cj fitted mary with a wire, there was a knock on the door, cj walked over and looked in the peep hole- It was brad!

    Brad walks in and right away started in on mary, "Do you have any idea the chaos you have started here? Look brad, said mary i had no idea i was getting on a bus to vegas somehow i think it was planned so dont give me crap i have had a rough week so back off!

    Alright you two snapped cj, lets just 

  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    get started with our plans on what to do next.

    "Brad, what have you found out about Chad?" CJ asked.

    "Chad!?" Mary exclaimed.  "What does he have to do with any of this?"

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    Well for starters carlos and chad are friends and have both been seen together going in a drug house we have been watching, the night we found the dead girl, they both had been there.

    I dont think brad is a murderer brad! said mary, he may not have all his marbles most of the time, but he is not a thug! 

    You didnt know anything about carlos either, said brad, so lets get started here, first i want you to call carlos on the phone, tell him you were kidnapped by some old bag, the one who hit you on the head. Hey, yelled cj, no offense said brad! tell him that she saw you with a bundle of money while you were on the bus and 

  • Tatina123
    Tatina123 Member Posts: 480
    edited October 2011

    Mary looked out the hotel window as Brad was rattling off instructions. Every word seemed muffled as she was trying to figure out all of this. "Wait a second, Brad. How could Chad be involved.....I've never seen anything suspicious going on."



    "Mary, criminals are great liars and only want people to see what they want them to see," he said.



    "And let me guess, since I've been associated with them, I've also become a target," she chimed in.


    "Bingo," CJ said.



    "Okay, Brad, tell me again what you want me to say to Carlos when I call him. I'm read to hear it now." Mary wanted him to know.



  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    "We want you to remain true to Chad, yet let Carlos know you are open to his advances too."

    "This sounds pretty dangerous to me." Mary said.

  • ruthbru
    ruthbru Member Posts: 57,235
    edited October 2011

    It is dangerous, Mary. But anything you do now is dangerous. You are in less danger working with us than dangling out there on your own.

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    Ok, then lets get started before I chicken out what do you want me to do?

    You have the wire and we will be watching you constantly, try to  be yourself and try to remain calm so you dont make anyone suspious, said Brad. 

    Yeah right said Mary, easier said than done, ok then here i go wish me luck

    Mary could feel the sweat on the palms of her hands and she felt shaky as she entered the casino, she walked around when she spotted chad, 

  • Tatina123
    Tatina123 Member Posts: 480
    edited October 2011

    Mary's immediate reaction when she saw Chad was to run away from him. But she remembered what Brad said...."Remain true to Chad."



    Mary then heard someone talking to her. She glanced to her right and saw CJ at the slot machine. "Get moving, Mary....it's showtime."



    Chad spotted her. Mary waved to him, plastered an immediate smile on her face and ran towards Chad.

  • ruthbru
    ruthbru Member Posts: 57,235
    edited October 2011

    Chad looked puzzled, "Mary, what are you doing here?"

    "Um, I just decided to have a little adventure."


    "But I thought you hated the idea of Vegas. The showgirls being subjected by the male chauvinist pigs, the poor being taken advantage of by feeding their greed and unrealistic dreams of striking it rich, and all that other stuff they said after I fell asleep in Sociology 101.....in fact, I thought you did a big paper on Vegas and Capitalistic Greed."

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    Yeah, well, things change chad, and its a long story how i got here I will tell you all about it later over  drinks, by the way, what are you doing here?

    Well, since you left with no word I was depressed and wanted to come and try my luck on the slots I really missed you mary, I missed you too chad, did you come alone?  No I am meeting carlos and some of his friends later wanna come along?

  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    "Sure, Chad." Mary replied untruthfully.  She was wondering what was going to happen when she didn't show up for her law school classes.  Probably she'd get kicked out of school.

    "Better to drop out of law school than be dead." she told herself.

  • Tatina123
    Tatina123 Member Posts: 480
    edited October 2011

    "Where are we meeting Carlos and his friends?" she asked Chad.

    "He's got a hotel room here," he said, as he held Mary's hand. 

    They zigzagged through the swarm of gamblers and hopefuls who wanted to strike it rich, quick.  Mary saw the elevators nearby.  That's where they were headed.

    Chad pushed the button and the doors opened right away.  They stepped inside.  And so did two other old ladies -- CJ was one of them.

    Chad pressed floor 34 -- the top floor.

    "Carlos' room is all the way up there?" she asked Chad.

    "Yeah," he said, without blinking an eye.  "It's the presidential suite."

    Mary silently gulped. "Carlos can afford that?" she whispered to Chad?

    "Mary, Carlos can afford a lot of things," he told her.  Mary willed herself not to turn to CJ as the elevator shot them upward.

  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    When the elevator reached the 34th floor, Chad led them out.  CJ went in the other direction, but Chad and Mary walked towards a room labeled 3410, and Chad knocked on the door.

    After some time, someone opened the door a crack, and Chad and Mary could hear party noises inside.

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    " Antonio My man, Howsit"? Said Chad  "You sure took your sweet time getting here" Said Antonio we have been waiting for you, got some good stuff just come in from columbia, come check it out" And who is this babe you got with ya?

    Before chad could answer carlos walks over and 

  • leaf
    leaf Member Posts: 8,188
    edited October 2011

    slaps Mary gently (if there can be a gentle slap.)  Mary was shocked.  "What was that for?"  Mary said.

    "Just a little pat to say hello." Carlos said.

  • debbie6122
    debbie6122 Member Posts: 5,161
    edited October 2011

    Then carlos leans in and whispers, 'I am keeping my eyes on you"

    Mary slips away to follow chad feeling uneasy, she knew carlos was suspicious of her otherwise why would he take her in the back room with his thugs earlier. ' He knows somthing she thought'  but what?

    Mary looks around the room and notices 

  • ruthbru
    ruthbru Member Posts: 57,235
    edited October 2011

    that all the men look very suspect; suits a little too expensive, diamond cuff links, greased back hair and sunglasses even though they were in a dimly lit room. And the women.....they all looked like high class hookers.

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