terminally ill teen, wants you to real her poem

biondi
biondi Member Posts: 223
edited June 2014 in May Their Memory Live On
terminally ill teen, wants you to real her poem

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  • biondi
    biondi Member Posts: 223
    edited March 2008

     

     

     

    Slow Dance


    This is a poem
    written by a teenager with cancer.

    She wants to see how many
    people get her poem.

    It is quite the poem. Please pass it
    on.

    This
    poem was written by a terminally ill young girl in a
    New York
    Hospital .



    It was sent
    by
    a medical doctor - Make sure to read what is in the closing statement
    AFTER THE POEM.




    SLOW DANCE



    Have you ever
    watched kids
    On a merry-go-round?

    Or listened to
    the rain
    Slapping on the ground?

    Ever followed a
    butterfly's erratic flight?

    Or gazed at the sun into the fading
    night?

    You better slow down.

    Don't dance so
    fast.

    Time is short.

    The music won't
    last.


    Do you run through each day on the
    fly?


    When you ask How are you?
    Do you hear the
    reply?



    When the day is done
    Do you lie in your
    bed
    With the next hundred chores
    Running through
    your head?

    You'd better slow down

    Don't dance so
    fast.

    Time is short.

    The music won't
    last.


    Ever told your child,
    We'll do it
    tomorrow?
    And in your haste,
    Not see
    his
    sorrow?

    Ever lost touch,
    Let a good
    friendship die
    Cause you never had time
    To call
    and say,'Hi'

    You'd better slow down.

    Don't dance
    so fast.

    Time is short.

    The music won't
    last.

    When you run so fast to get somewhere
    You
    miss half the fun of getting there.



    When you worry and hurry
    through your day,
    It is like an unopened
    gift....

    Thrown away.

    Life is not a
    race.
    Do take it slower
    Hear the
    music
    Before the song is over.



    ------------
    --------



    FORWARDED E-MAILS ARE TRACKED TO OBTAIN THE TOTAL
    COUNT.



    Dear All: PLEASE pass this mail on to everyone you know -
    even to those you don't know! It is the request of a special girl who will soon
    leave this world due to cancer.



    This young girl has 6 months left
    to live, and as her dying wish, she wanted to send a letter telling everyone to
    live their life to the fullest, since she never will.



    She'll
    never make it to prom, graduate from high school, or get married and have a
    family of her own.



    By you sending this to as many people as
    possible, you can give her and her family a little hope, because with every name
    that this is sent to, The American Cancer Society will donate 3 cents per name
    to her treatment and recovery plan. One guy sent this to 500 people! So I know
    that we can at least send it to 5 or 6. It's
    not even your money, just
    your time!



    PLEASE PASS ON AS A LAST REQUEST.



    Dr.
    Dennis Shields, Professor
    Depa rtment of Developmental and Molecular
    Biology
    1300 Morris Park Avenue
    Bronx , New York
    10461

  • biondi
    biondi Member Posts: 223
    edited March 2008

    sorry, it should say, "read her poem"

  • danix5
    danix5 Member Posts: 755
    edited March 2008

    That is a beautiful poem.  That we all can relate to and should listen to her!  Thank you for sharing it with us.  I copied and sent to friends. Hope it counts.

    Daniella

  • AnnNYC
    AnnNYC Member Posts: 4,484
    edited March 2008

    Biondi,

    the poem is beautiful. 

    But the part about the ACS donating money for passing it along is false.

    Also, the name of Dennis Shields, Ph.D., a research scientist at Albert Einstein College of Medicine in the Bronx, somehow got attached to this chain letter as far back as 1999, and he has been trying to "break the chain" since then: http://legalminds.lp.findlaw.com/list/evid-l/msg01132.html

    According to http://www.breakthechain.org/exclusives/slowdance.html

    "The poem was written by David L. Weatherford and published in 1991 by the Russ Berrie Company. It was added to the chain letter in early 2001. Weatherford is uncertain how the poem came to be associated with the dying child hoax and does not endorse its inclusion."

    And there are many more discussions of this hoax available online: http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q=%22dennis+shields%22+cancer+patient 

    Biondi, maybe you could edit your post so that it only includes the poem?

    Best,

    Ann

  • lewisfamily503
    lewisfamily503 Member Posts: 621
    edited March 2008

    Well, hoax or not, it IS a great poem, huh? It really captures the "essence" of slowing down and enjoying life. Whatever its origin, I love the message!



    Anne



  • Ivylane
    Ivylane Member Posts: 544
    edited May 2008

    you can also go to snopes.com  this hoax has been around for years.

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