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  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited June 2009

    to top it off Mazy

    my boys are Lazy

    aaargh

  • saint
    saint Member Posts: 1,877
    edited June 2009

    Hugs all---some really beautiful works here.......I will have to get back at it as things here improve SLOWLY

    Time time time

    be well & stay strong

  • EWB
    EWB Member Posts: 2,927
    edited June 2009

    I feel a community poem coming on....eveyone just adds a line.

    it really does suck

    to top it off Mazy

    my boys are Lazy

    I will have to get back at it as things here improve SLOWLY

    Time time time

  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited June 2009

    it really does suck

    to top it off Mazy

    my boys are Lazy

    I will have to get back at it as things here improve SLOWLY

    Time time time

    we don't have to rhyme

  • Estepp
    Estepp Member Posts: 6,416
    edited June 2009

    it really does suck

    to top it off Mazy

    my boys are Lazy

    I will have to get back at it as things here improve SLOWLY

    Time time time

    we don't have to rhyme

    tomorrow is my day, how am I to deal

    will anyone remember

    or am I alone.

  • Mazy1959
    Mazy1959 Member Posts: 1,431
    edited June 2009

    it really does suck

    to top it off Mazy

    my boys are Lazy

    I will have to get back at it as things here improve SLOWLY

    Time time time

    we don't have to rhyme

    tomorrow is my day, how am I to deal

    will anyone remember

    or am I alone.

    I am here but I may forget

    Since I often am totally stoned

  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited June 2009

    SurprisedLaughing

    ---------------------------

    it really does suck

    to top it off Mazy

    my boys are Lazy

    I will have to get back at it as things here improve SLOWLY

    Time time time

    we don't have to rhyme

    tomorrow is my day, how am I to deal

    will anyone remember

    or am I alone.

    I am here but I may forget

    Since I often am totally stoned

    pwned

  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited June 2009

    this thread needs a bump

    to think it all started with a lump

    Oh Lord please help me not be a grump

  • EWB
    EWB Member Posts: 2,927
    edited June 2009

    this thread needs a bump

    to think it all started with a lump

    Oh Lord please help me not be a grump

    Help me, Oh Lord to learn how to jump

    as my lump, I think, is off to the dump

  • farila_1966
    farila_1966 Member Posts: 224
    edited June 2009

    LOL ladies.. You crack me up.. LOL.

    That is wonderful. I am not at my creative best today -- I did not have internet connection for sometime because of lightning strike. Then the power is on and off most of the time. I have taken up counseling and teaching professionaly now. Lots of work for the start up. It will be easy once I settle down. Love to read this thread...

    Love and hugs

    Farila

  • EWB
    EWB Member Posts: 2,927
    edited June 2009

    Very nice Farila! What is your area/subject of teaching?

  • dreamwriter
    dreamwriter Member Posts: 3,255
    edited June 2009

    Strange little aliens, living and hiding next door.

    Terrorists invading the sensitive organs of my body.

    They eat and grow, spreading their evil shadow

    Over the goodness of the body that was beneath.

    Each attack is punishing, I know that they will win the war

    But each battle is one that I can win, for now. 

  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited June 2009

    you wonder what they do with all the tissue they remove... you'd

    think they wouldn't want it to go to waste - maybe make dogfood

  • arnie
    arnie Member Posts: 3,050
    edited June 2009
    Keep fighting dreamwriter...your poem brought tears to my eyes...Bless you dear sister...
  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited June 2009

    I thought of mortality

    and then of fertility

    and the utility of pleasure

    and the futility of worry

    and our responsibility to

    live with nobility of purpose.

    I think of the cancer growing within

    and pray that I'll live to begin

    the life worthy of what I've been given.

  • EWB
    EWB Member Posts: 2,927
    edited June 2009

    I wonder about this daily. Have I, will I, do justice to those who have been caring for me, taking over chores and tasks so that I can care for me. Am I selfish? Am I worthy? How do I leave my mark on the world (seen or unseen)

  • Mazy1959
    Mazy1959 Member Posts: 1,431
    edited July 2009

    Cleansing Cry 

    Teary, sad and hopeless it seems

    When I think too much

    I shouldn't allow myself to go there

    Makes me cry and such

    Sit and think of the worst

    When I am alone

    I should get out and go for a walk

    But I choose to stay home

    Sobbing and gasping in anger

    As this evil fungus tries to control

    I allowed it to bring me down again

    It reaches in and takes hold

    Drying my eyes and breathing deep

    I hear loved one's voices

    Telling me it will be alright

    God is helping me make choices

    I have had my cleansing cry

    It will make me stronger for the effort

    It's always such a comfort

    That God knows of my tears and hurt

  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited July 2009

    oh man....

    i had a scan.

  • saint
    saint Member Posts: 1,877
    edited July 2009

    I can handle so many plans:

    The service, what to do with my remains,

    who gets my jewelry, my prized possesions?

    Then one night I looked at my purse

    and was undone!

    Someone will have to go thru such personal stuff!

    It makes me cry to think of our purses.......

  • arnie
    arnie Member Posts: 3,050
    edited July 2009

    Oh my goodness, ladies... I'm sitting here wiping away tears... ((((((hugs))))))))) so true...

  • arnie
    arnie Member Posts: 3,050
    edited July 2009

    I pondered whether to submit this or not last night... but after reading Saint's submission I thought I would... it's not mine... but thought it was good.

    KEEP YOUR FORK

    There was a young woman who had been diagnosed with a terminal illness and had been given three months to live. So as she was getting her things 'in order,' she contacted her Pastor and had him come to her house to discuss certain aspects of her final wishes.

    She told him which songs she wanted sung at the service, what scriptures she would like read, and what outfit she wanted to be buried in.

    Everything was in order and the Pastor was preparing to leave when the young woman suddenly remembered something very important to her.

    'There's one more thing,' she said excitedly..

    'What's that?' came the Pastor's reply.

    'This is very important,' the young woman continued. 'I want to be buried with a fork in my right hand.'

    The Pastor stood looking at the young woman, not knowing quite what to say.

    That surprises you, doesn't it?' the young woman asked.

    'Well, to be honest, I'm puzzled by the request,' said the Pastor.

    The young woman explained. 'My grandmother once told me this story, and from that time on I have always tried to pass along its message to those I love and those who are in need of encouragement. In all my years of attending socials and dinners, I always remember that when the dishes of the main course were being cleared, someone would inevitably lean over and say, 'Keep your fork.' It was my favorite part because I knew that something better was coming...like velvety chocolate cake or deep-dish apple pie. Something wonderful, and with substance!'

    So, I just want people to see me there in that casket with a fork in my hand and I want them to wonder 'What's with the fork?' Then I want you to tell them: 'Keep your fork .the best is yet to come.'

    The Pastor's eyes welled up with tears of joy as he hugged the young woman good-bye. He knew this would be one of the last times he would see her before her death. But he also knew that the young woman had a better grasp of heaven than he did.. She had a better grasp of what heaven would be like than many people twice her age, with twice as much experience and knowledge. She KNEW that something better was coming.

    At the funeral people were walking by the young woman's casket and they saw the cloak she was wearing and the fork placed in her right hand. Over and over, the Pastor heard the question, 'What's with the fork?' And over and over he smiled.

    During his message, the Pastor told the people of the conversation he had with the young woman shortly before she died. He also told them about the fork and about what it symbolized to her. He told the people how he could not stop thinking about the fork and told them that they probably would not be able to stop thinking about it either.

    He was right. So the next time you reach down for your fork let it remind you, ever so gently, that the best is yet to come.

  • saint
    saint Member Posts: 1,877
    edited July 2009

    I don't think I ever posted this one---I found it buried in some stuff earlier...

    I waited for years for vocation. I never could figure it out. Something had to be coming to make my time here really count.

     

    It came in the form of a monster. A beast infiltrated my life. I knew in that moment I'd found it: My new job, my God Job, my life.

     

    So I embraced all the stuff I had studied & practiced connecting with Grace. I found that the Spirit is strongest when you stop looking in your own face.

     

    I know that the powers are Present, every moment there's lessons to learn. I will not move on to the next plane til the lesson fulfills that deep yearn.

     

    I'm visited daily with glory & strength comes from all kinds of things. My feet seem to be getting lighter as I feel myself rising-like wings!

     

    I know in the end there'll be sadness, but I trust in my heart they will know that everything needed was given, I ask & He makes it so.

     

    I firmly believe I can stay here as long as I do what I need: To demonstrate faith in the Father & show how his Love strengthens me.

     

     

     
  • apple
    apple Member Posts: 7,799
    edited July 2009

    that's wonderful Saint.. so helpful.

  • arnie
    arnie Member Posts: 3,050
    edited July 2009

    Amen Saint, simply beautiful ...

  • dkhancock1948
    dkhancock1948 Member Posts: 433
    edited July 2009

    Wow is all I can say.  There are so many threads on this website.  So many great threads!  This is one.  For the 3 weeks I couldn't drive after my mastectomy, I have never felt so down in my life.  The first week I could drive, the church I used to go to had an adult bible school class.  It was like Giod thumped me on my head one night and said I have angels all around you.  It was the morning after I wrote my first poem, Expectations:

    Expectations.

    Why do we get them?

    Why are they there?

    For disappointments,

    It seems come from everywhere.

    We have expectations for ourselves,

    We have expectations for others.

    Our sons, our daughters

    Our fathers,  our mothers.

    We are to trust in God, not in man.

    His promises are true,

    No expectations needed,

    We just need to do as He said we should do.

    Give all to the Lord, no matter what.

    From tears and sorrow, to happiness and joy.

    Our burdens seem heavy,

    but the Lord said with Me they are light.

    Through every day and the darkest night.

    Expectations,

    Why do we get them?

    Why are they there?

    For disappointments,

    It seems come from everywhere.

    From ourselves, from others,

    From sons, from daughters,

    From fathers, from mothers.

    But not from the One in whom all our trust we should give.

    Just read His letters daily,

    They show us how to live.

    Expectations.

    Why do we get them?

    Why are they there?

    With our friend and our Lord,

    No expectations are needed,

    Our burdens, our sorrows, He will gladly bear.

     For the first time in this whole cancer deal, I realized I had put unspoken expectations on other people.  Thinking completely of me first and not looking at what they were going through.  I realized my children were doing as much as they could for me.  I had not thought of their daily lives they had before I had cancer.  The morning after I wrote this, I basically got thumped.  It was like God said, think about all who have been around you, look at what everyone has done, look at what I have done for you.   

  • farila_1966
    farila_1966 Member Posts: 224
    edited July 2009

    Wow Ladies.. I cannot go through this thread without some tears. So very touching. I missed you all so much.

    Love and hugs

  • farila_1966
    farila_1966 Member Posts: 224
    edited July 2009

    Veil with holes

    This veil, this robe, as dark as coal

    Alas it badly fails to achieve the intended goal

    This skin covering is just playing foul

    For I need a veil to cover my soul

    I fear not my flesh and skin of doing skin

    As I fear the passions that rage within

    Within my heart, within my soul

    On whom I fail to put a veil or gain my control

    Anyway even I draw a veil over my face

    To hide those feelings which would cause me disgrace

    My awakened conscience asks me, "Is this right?"

    But resigns calling me a hypocrite

    I can't help it, for there many ifs and buts

    And to not be a hypocrite I don't have enough guts............

  • Mazy1959
    Mazy1959 Member Posts: 1,431
    edited July 2009

    Farilla...........OMG...that is so powerful

  • footprintsangel
    footprintsangel Member Posts: 43,890
    edited July 2009

    Dressing

    Ketchup with my heart,

    Dress it up with love.

    You musta heard I love you,

    And that your my A1

  • footprintsangel
    footprintsangel Member Posts: 43,890
    edited July 2009

    S is the special way you smile

    A is always going that extra mile.

     I  is  for the important things you do,

    N is for the nice way you help others through.

    T is for the tender heart in You!

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